Alien Films(a.k.a. swivel games) wrote:
Hey all,
I am working on a movie called Ring of Fire (or Rainbow of Fire still trying to decide). It’s pretty good but I would like you all to review the current plot and tell me what you think. If there is anything you think would be better taken out of the plot or something to add just tell me, I would be happy to take your ideas into consideration.
A Nasa Project goes bad.
NASA (or some other big space org) makes a new ship that will revolutionize space travel, it contains 3 fuel tanks and it has a new way of conserving fuel to use less fuel for longer travels. A Space station was recently created, and the ship would be a prefect way to go back and forth and maybe help to extend out into further space. Two demonstrations are going to be performed on the same day but 6 hours different times, will this make a difference? The first demonstration that is ran is the demonstration for the new shuttle, They were to demonstrate that there ships could fly easily around the earth in the earths atmosphere. During the launch one of the secondary fuel tanks gained a leek, and while it flew its course around the earths surface it created a ring of fuel around the earth. About 6 hours after launch the ship was still in the air about 2/6 around the earth. The US Air Force launched a new jet they created but it flew straight through the ring of fuel igniting it and destroying the Air Forces new jet. This continued to ignite the fuel around the earth creating a 'rainbow of fire' as it looked on the surface of the earth. This situation gets critical, as the fuel ignited the fire would soon catch up to the ship(or the ship would run into it?) and trying to use the secondary fuel tanks to help boost them a way from the flames, it created pressure that the tank could not hold(It was a bad tank) and soon burst creating a path for the fire to rage on until it caught the rest of the tanks and exploded nearly destroying almost all of a country in the third world(the ships course is running east and I haven’t decided which country yet, needs to be one pretty far away from US like china or something around there). The radiation was getting critical, it was affecting the world. The soon. This ring of fire apposed a threat to the world, the only thing they could do is evacuate the world. The remaining countries scheduled a massive world evacuation and evacuated to the stations they had (each country or set of countries had there own station(there were many) please note that this is not sci-fi type stuff its like something that happens close to now, something modern, it is sci-fi but very little.) As the last few remaining ships were evacuating the last 6 ships were destroyed being engulfed by this massive explosion the earth had created while self-destructing due to the radiation. The main characters family got separated during the evacuation and got on separate ships. On one of those last few ships was his family, and he had only wished that they had been on opposite ships. He lost everything including his family, his house, his wife, and his home planet. Though he lost all that he was still head of Nasa as they journey to the unknown universe.
"Armageddon has come, but it was not meant to kill us, but wake us up from our lazy sleep."
copyright 2006(C) Ben Dalrymple
I also need help on deciding the name.
-Alien
I am working on a movie called Ring of Fire (or Rainbow of Fire still trying to decide). It’s pretty good but I would like you all to review the current plot and tell me what you think. If there is anything you think would be better taken out of the plot or something to add just tell me, I would be happy to take your ideas into consideration.
Ring of Fire Plot wrote:
A Nasa Project goes bad.
NASA (or some other big space org) makes a new ship that will revolutionize space travel, it contains 3 fuel tanks and it has a new way of conserving fuel to use less fuel for longer travels. A Space station was recently created, and the ship would be a prefect way to go back and forth and maybe help to extend out into further space. Two demonstrations are going to be performed on the same day but 6 hours different times, will this make a difference? The first demonstration that is ran is the demonstration for the new shuttle, They were to demonstrate that there ships could fly easily around the earth in the earths atmosphere. During the launch one of the secondary fuel tanks gained a leek, and while it flew its course around the earths surface it created a ring of fuel around the earth. About 6 hours after launch the ship was still in the air about 2/6 around the earth. The US Air Force launched a new jet they created but it flew straight through the ring of fuel igniting it and destroying the Air Forces new jet. This continued to ignite the fuel around the earth creating a 'rainbow of fire' as it looked on the surface of the earth. This situation gets critical, as the fuel ignited the fire would soon catch up to the ship(or the ship would run into it?) and trying to use the secondary fuel tanks to help boost them a way from the flames, it created pressure that the tank could not hold(It was a bad tank) and soon burst creating a path for the fire to rage on until it caught the rest of the tanks and exploded nearly destroying almost all of a country in the third world(the ships course is running east and I haven’t decided which country yet, needs to be one pretty far away from US like china or something around there). The radiation was getting critical, it was affecting the world. The soon. This ring of fire apposed a threat to the world, the only thing they could do is evacuate the world. The remaining countries scheduled a massive world evacuation and evacuated to the stations they had (each country or set of countries had there own station(there were many) please note that this is not sci-fi type stuff its like something that happens close to now, something modern, it is sci-fi but very little.) As the last few remaining ships were evacuating the last 6 ships were destroyed being engulfed by this massive explosion the earth had created while self-destructing due to the radiation. The main characters family got separated during the evacuation and got on separate ships. On one of those last few ships was his family, and he had only wished that they had been on opposite ships. He lost everything including his family, his house, his wife, and his home planet. Though he lost all that he was still head of Nasa as they journey to the unknown universe.
"Armageddon has come, but it was not meant to kill us, but wake us up from our lazy sleep."
copyright 2006(C) Ben Dalrymple
I also need help on deciding the name.
-Alien
(yes, i know its not actually "on fire" so much as its a nuclear reaction, but i was making a joke 
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I kept trying to tell them that it's not hot enough for that 
